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Mình đang tập viết mấy bài essay cho kỳ thi TOEFL cuối tháng. Sau đây là đứa con của mình.
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Đề bài: (Trong cuốn: The Official Guide to The TOEFL Test)
Do you agree ỏ disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Bài này mình làm chính xác trong khung thời gian 30 phút. Sau đây là bài viết của mình:
You yoursefl are the best teacher for your life, not you parents nor your teachers, your friends. That is what experience show me when I growth up. One may probably consider his parent are the truth. He follow whatever they suppose to be right. But let me show you the opposite point of view.
The first reason I use for my statement is the time your parents dedicate for you. Even the most careful parents can not trace you anywhere, while ofcourse you always be with you. And think about when you growth up, you mostly leave your family. So you will be no longer get advice or lesson from your parent. Let say you study abroad, for example America, while your parent are in Vietnam, you are not able to contact your family frequently anymore.
Secondly, your parent's perpective cannot perfectly appropriate with your generation. They view life as it was 20 years ago. You have new technology and modern oppinion. For instance computer, you're certainly more skillful than your parents. In addition in Asia, you are not depended on tradition as much as your parents are, older generations tend to marry sooner. These evident obviously warrant my statement.
The last reason but not less important is you know who you are best. Sometime your parent do not know what you want to be but what they want you to be. By that in several family, parents shape their child's way of life. Moreover, some parents want their honeys fulfill somewhat they have not done in their life, or simple do job that they think is good. For example a teacher often want his son to be a professior than a footballer. This one also restrict the role of parents as teacher.
In conclusion, you should be, and mostly the best teacher for your life. Don't depend on any other one, even your parent. So practice to prepare for your life